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*zane had just finished the last bits of his food whilst thinking of how to thank tibbie...then he had an idea*
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zane: that's it....i know it means doing what i hate...but if i can do it quickly, then it'll be perfect
i mean the floor is finished, so thats the tough part out fo te way. ...the rest is just rubbish and objects that are out of place
yes, this is it
i can do it. i will do it
her house will look as good as new
for her.
yes! i tihnk i might be obsessed...but no slig has ever given my proper food without punching me in the gut
but this one is different....and i owe her for the food....
that and i think i've fallen for her...
well i'd better get started. this junk isn't gonna clean itself up.
on to work!
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*zane finishes claening up, and tibbie returns home from work...'nuff said about this really*
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tibbie: *exhausted sigh/pant* work was exhausting today...some paramites broke out of the enclosure...and since the mudokens began to refuse to work, "I" had to round them up.
oh well....i can at least relax now that work is over
*she enteres her hous and is surprised* d-did i enter the wrong house?
*walsk out to examin the house number* no...this is my house *goes back inside* it's so.....clean...
amazingly clean...it's...it's like a completley new building...
just then the mudoken approached me...he was...blushing...how cute
he asked me "what do you think" ...i started to think that maybe my visual enhancer was on the blink....so i did something he'd never expect to see...i removed my visual enahcer revealing my true eyes...it was...amazing...the house was so clean...
"why did you do this? i never aksed you to." i quesitoned him. he mereley explained that he was greateful for the food i gave him...and for treating him fairly...
>/////< oh god, he's making me blush
i had just opened my eyes and there i was...unknwingly hugging him...i-i was in his arms....i-i was...
O////O ...^////^ i don't want to leave his arms.
i don't care if the other sligs see this...i love this moment..and him...i love him...
i kiss him...then there's a long pause....but then we kiss again...i don't want this to end.
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*you get the idea....it's zane's point of view again*
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zane: phew....that was tiring....but i did it. this place looks brand new....
i decide to take a long rest and wait for her to arrive...i beginn to wonder how she would react...unfortunatly i start thinging negativley...
*shudder* no, musn't think about the bad things....
i'll just wait for her...then what ever happens will happen.
some hours have passed and now she's home...she looks exhausted...but the look on her face...
she thinks she's got the worng address.
she's seen the work that i've done for her
i decide that this is the right moment to approach her
i then ask her what she thinks of it
to my surprise she's so unsure of it...that she takes takes her eyes off!? no, it's a visual enmhancer 
i then get to see her real eyes.
i then get to see her real eyes....woah
they're blue....j-just like saphires
she asks me "why did you do this? i never aksed you to." i merley reply "you gave me food and haven't treated em like a slave...this was just a little sometihng to say...thank you."
it seem's i've made her blush, she seems so pleased
sh-she's hugging me...
i think i'll hug her back
i think i'll hug her back...
this...this is nice...
she then pulls me closer and kisses me
...wow
...woah
...i had to take a long pause...i was just so surprised
...then i pull her in for a kiss...
this is by far the best moment i've had EVER.
we continue to kiss....wiht both of us hoping this moment never has to end.
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it's so romantic X3 it's a perfect backstory!
you've really given me an idea on how i will portray and (attempt) to write about her sometime. i will have to practice drawing sligs and mudokons more XD my sister is teaching me
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she's just as if not sweeter than me <3 she has a really pretty mudokon character, too 
you've really given me an idea on how i will portray and (attempt) to write about her sometime. i will have to practice drawing sligs and mudokons more XD my sister is teaching me
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she's just as if not sweeter than me <3 she has a really pretty mudokon character, too